In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?

In some cultures, it is often said that if

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make great efforts, they will be able to attain whatever they want;

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partly

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on individual aspects. Whether

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attitude is correct or not, is a controversial issue. From my point of view, that would be a certain method to encourage

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to achieve their goals; in spite of the fact that sometimes might be frustrating

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lack of

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. In fact, it is extremely valuable to persuade

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hard for their individual purposes and teach them

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fact that if they do their best, all of their dreams will be fulfilled.

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, our

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must be ensured that we will stay by their

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in order to help them on their long path;

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, they can overcome all the difficulties.

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,

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approach is not always successful or practical.

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,

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might witness a fiasco during a competition as

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to their hard

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for several hours or even years. So, it would improve their vulnerability and disappointment and might instill

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assumption that they did not deserve that triumph.

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,

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are associated

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financial issues and they demand a lot of money;

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they made a great deal of

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.

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situation, we are responsible

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them up and

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them other factors that are

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important to attain their dreams

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as dedication and collaboration. In conclusion, parents should make their

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aware of the failures that might

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place

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they are trying hard to achieve anything they want.

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, motivating

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to work hard in order to make their dreams true is an essential issue that

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should be taught; even though, they might be impossible to achieve