You and your friend have booked tickets to go to the theatre. You are now unable to go but have found another friend to accompany him/her instead. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • explain why you can no longer go to the theatre with your friend • say who is able to go instead of you • tell them why you think this person would be good to go with.

#friend #tickets #theatre #person

Dear Aliya, I hope that you are well. How things are going? How's

about

Change preposition

apply

show examples

your studies

Change the punctuation

show examples

I am sorry for not coming with you. When we

deceided

Correct your spelling

decided

to go

Change preposition

show examples

the cinema

for watching

Change preposition

to watch

show examples

film

Add an article

the film

a film

show examples

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

I was

Rephrase

very

show examples

excited to join

with

Change preposition

apply

show examples

you.

However

, I was willing to come and enjoy with you to watch the movie

together

Rephrase

with you

show examples

Besides

this

, I was planning to eat dinner after

movie

Correct article usage

the movie

show examples

in the Cafe. Unfortunately,

Change the capitalization

show examples

cannot come with you because I have a promotion test on Monday so

its

Replace the word

it's

it is

show examples

important to prepare before

exam

Correct article usage

the exam

show examples

. But I am referring to my best friend she is available to join

with

Change preposition

apply

show examples

you. Even we had watched a series

last

time and I enjoyed her

compnay

Correct your spelling

company

. She likes movies and knowledge about

latest

Correct article usage

the latest

show examples

films. I am assure that you will love her company and enjoy

together

Correct pronoun usage

it together

show examples

. I am looking forward to hearing from you

back

Rephrase

apply

show examples

. Best Regards.

Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on Wed Oct 18 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

greeting and closing

Address the recipient by name and use a polite greeting.

complete response

Ensure the letter provides a clear and complete response to all prompts in the task.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter.

single idea per paragraph

Organize your ideas into paragraphs and focus on one main idea per paragraph.

logical structure

Use a variety of cohesive devices to connect your ideas and create a logical structure.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

152 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
It is indisputable that human activity has inflicted harm upon plants and animals globally. The ongoing debate centers on whether the damage is irreversible, rendering it too late to mitigate, or if there is still a window of opportunity for effective action. In this essay, I will argue that while certain instances of destruction may be irreversible, viable measures are still available to preserve and rehabilitate the environment.
4
band
1.Some people think its a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The issue of whether it is advantageous for top-level managers to receive substantially higher remuneration than their colleagues is a topic of ongoing debate. In my opinion, it is entirely appropriate for senior managers to have much higher salaries than other workers in a company.
4
band
Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many communities think that extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are unsafe and dangerous and they must be prohibited. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this view for many reasons.
4
band
Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the years, television has become an essential item in modern-day homes. That is said, a certain segment of individuals argue that TV set is becoming a threat to humans as they believe it creates lazy individuals and isolated habitats. Though some people stand against this affirmation, I stand with the people who support this affirmation. The following paragraphs will analyze two factors which contribute to the ideology as well as my opinion.
7
band
Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is often said that music has the power to unite and connect people, regardless of their cultural backgrounds or ages. I completely agree with this view, and will give my reasons below.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

1.Some people think its a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?