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The best way to make road transport safe is to require drivers to take a driving test every year. How much do you agree or disagree?

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Ensuring
safety
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 on the road is crucial. One of the methods proposed is annually requiring all the drivers to retake their driving test.
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, I do not agree with that since the solution is not as effective in terms of
safety
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 as other alternatives, that I am going to talk about in
this
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 essay. If retaking the exam becomes mandatory for all, it will cost a lot of money for the government
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 the individuals.
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, I assume, that few people are financially able to pay for those. Another reason relates to the inconvenience of those tests.
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, I do agree that driving skills are essential when it comes to
safety
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 on the road, and refreshing,
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, the theory, would be beneficial.
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, I don't believe that skills and knowledge will suddenly get worse in a year. There are better solutions for making roads safe. Testing a driver's knowledge is beneficial when it is done more irregularly,
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, every five or ten years. In a longer period of time, some things may be forgotten
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 as the meanings of different traffic signs.
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, in some countries, installing more speed detection cameras on roads, which will remind drivers and increase their awareness of their driving, has shown significant improvements in
safety
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. When comes to awareness, another idea is to organize different social campaigns about the causes of traffic accidents. With these developments combined, it is possible to more effectively develop
safety
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 on the road.
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,
although
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, I agree that testing drivers' skills and knowledge through tests is important, I do not think examining those annually is necessary. Doing that more irregularly
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 installing speed detection cameras and raising awareness of
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 will be more beneficial in my opinion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • road safety
  • annual driving tests
  • traffic laws
  • physical and cognitive abilities
  • deteriorating driving skills
  • financial and logistical implications
  • alternative safety measures
  • improved road infrastructure
  • public transport
  • stricter enforcement
  • demographics
  • tailored assessments
  • individual capabilities
  • psychological effects
  • confidence
  • performance
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