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The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

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As the number of endangered species increases and the degradation of vegetation shows up, more significance of having a variety of life forms becomes noticeable.
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, there should be some individual and public activities that can preserve biodiversity. Everyone is aware of the benefits of flora and fauna. So we must protect them.
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, I will discuss a few practical actions in
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 essay. The most important function is the responsibility of governments which should not allow constructive companies to destroy plants by so-called progress and invade many animals' habitats. Or at least ensure that they minimize the damage.
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, it seems less effective because nothing can curb human's tendency for money and possession. An alternative strategy would be informing and educating people about preservations that can reduce harm and
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 investing in research related to either the maintenance of plants and animals or reproduction.
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, land reclamation under the supervision of a forestry specialist whether time-consuming but effective. Another efficient method could be protecting the special creatures.
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, bees are crucial to transferring male parts to females as a step of reproduction.
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, Planting flowers and providing boxes for them to build their colony is considered feasible. Even though they have a 'give and take' relationship and adequately affect each other.
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, the existence of different types of species and vegetation is vital. So whether it costs a lot or needs long-term actions, can not be underestimated. Fortunately, there are still chances to make up for the destruction by solutions that are mentioned before.
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