Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, it cannot be denied how various environmental issues have worsened, which is why innumerable suggestions centring on mandating citizens to look after their local
environment
have emerged. I completely agree with this
proposal, based on the following reasons.
For one thing, I find it exceedingly important to put the responsibility as regards environmental protection to the manufactories. The people behind these companies especially the owners are considered to be the culprits of environmental pollution, whether air, soil, or water. If these individuals are not reprimanded or penalized by the government, they will surely continue to damage nature by overly exhausting its resources or polluting the air and bodies of water for their businesses’ growth and personal benefits. As a result
, not only animals will go extinct, but also
humans will fail to survive eventually.
For another, apart from the responsibility bestowed on commercial entities, normal citizens should also
be made responsible for looking after the environment
as they also
contribute to severe environmental devastation. To cite a relevant example, little did people know that their frequent use of home appliances such
as air-conditioning units and refrigerators, daily transportation like fuel-powered private cars, and kitchen tools, namely, disposable bags and cutleries, is also
to blame for environmental deterioration. This
is because they contribute to huge amounts of carbon footprints. If these related practices are not halted immediately, global warming will continue to worsen.
In conclusion, I am extremely sure that if everyone, whether those behind businesses or merely average citizens, is given the responsibility to take good care of the environment
, existing environmental dilemmas will not be aggravated, and a sustainable environment
will be guaranteed for future generations to come.Submitted by xiaoruoling7 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite