Some people prefer to live with a roommate. Others prefer to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer

Few individuals tend to live with a roommate ,

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others prefer living all by themselves. Though

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it totally depends on an individual's perspective ,

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are benefits to both living styles. In my opinion , I like living

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person because

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feel like there is

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support at any time of the day . On one hand, having an independent lifestyle is quite adventurous and thrilling, as we come across various experiences

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our day-to-day life.

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to that , having a space just for oneself

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expand their horizon of creativity , independence and personal space.

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is a lot of

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living alone like getting through bills, connections and groceries, it is considered as learning curb and way through which an individual can evolve into an adult .

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, it makes a person learn

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how to get their life together by doing basic everyday needs .

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, I lived in a dorm alone away from

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during my University days and

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was put in a place where

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to do all my chores like cleaning , washing , folding clothes , going to the grocery store

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everything

on my own,

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these were done by my mom back home.

On the other hand

, sharing a place with

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another individual will teach us many imperative life lessons.

Firstly

, adults will know the value of sharing like sharing a bedroom , a bathroom and a living area.

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, it will

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develop

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new

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and individuals will be able to make connections

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and

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.

Furthermore

, it will make them learn about the importance of dividing chores and bills. Obviously, it will make them less homesick and think less about their family members living thousands of miles away from them.

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, my brother migrated to a new city called Bangalore for work and he lived with a roommate. His roommate helped him to get to know about the place,

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and helped him to make new friends.

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, making my family less worried

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how my brother was going to survive in a new city. In my conclusion, I firmly believe that moving away from their home is

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next big step in an adult's growth and personal development.

However

, living and adapting to a new environment and new space totally depends on the person and the way they want to live.

Thus

, making the right decision at the right time on whether or not to expand their boundaries is

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up to

the individual.