Some people prefer to live with a roommate. Others prefer to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer
Few individuals tend to live with a roommate ,
while
others prefer living all by themselves. Though,
it totally depends on an individual's perspective , Remove the comma
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they
are benefits to both living styles. In my opinion , I like livingCorrect pronoun usage
there
a
person because Change preposition
as a
i
feel like there is Change the capitalization
I
a
support at any time of the day .
On one hand, having an independent lifestyle is quite adventurous and thrilling, as we come across various experiences Correct article usage
apply
on
our day-to-day life. Change preposition
in
In addition
to that , having a space just for oneself with
expand their horizon of creativity , independence and personal space. Correct your spelling
will
Eventhough
, Correct your spelling
Even
there
is a lot of Correct word choice
though there
additonal
stuff to learn Correct your spelling
additional
on
living alone like getting through bills, connections and groceries, it is considered as learning curb and way through which an individual can evolve into an adult . Change preposition
about
However
, it makes a person learn on
how to get their life together by doing basic everyday needs . Change preposition
apply
For example
, I lived in a dorm alone away from family
during my University days and Correct pronoun usage
my family
i
was put in a place where Change the capitalization
I
i
Change the capitalization
I
have
to do all my chores like cleaning , washing , folding clothes , going to the grocery store Wrong verb form
had
everthing
on my own, Correct your spelling
everything
while
these were done by my mom back home.
On the other hand
, sharing a place with an
another individual will teach us many imperative life lessons. Remove the article
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Firstly
, adults will know the value of sharing like sharing a bedroom , a bathroom and a living area. Secondly
, it will also
develop a
new Correct article usage
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relationship
and individuals will be able to make connections Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
quicker
and Replace the word
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wider
. Replace the word
widely
Furthermore
, it will make them learn about the importance of dividing chores and bills. Obviously, it will make them less homesick and think less about their family members living thousands of miles away from them. For example
, my brother migrated to a new city called Bangalore for work and he lived with a roommate. His roommate helped him to get to know about the place, amenities
and helped him to make new friends. Correct word choice
and amenities
Thus
, making my family less worried on
how my brother was going to survive in a new city.
In my conclusion, I firmly believe that moving away from their home is Change preposition
about
a
next big step in an adult's growth and personal development. Correct article usage
the
However
, living and adapting to a new environment and new space totally depends on the person and the way they want to live. Thus
, making the right decision at the right time on whether or not to expand their boundaries is upto
the individual.Correct your spelling
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