The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the frequency of USA residents
ate
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who ate
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fast
food
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in restaurants from 2003 to 2013. 
Overall
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, it can be seen that most people consume fast
food
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once a week almost
in
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apply
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all years
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every year
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. What is more, there are a few residents who never ate
this
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kind of
food
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.
According to
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the data, the percentage of residents who ate fast
food
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once a week and once or twice a month was equal, at about 33%,
at
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in
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2013 and 2006. The minority of citizens ate fast
food
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never or every day, at about merely 4% respectively, in all years. Another key finding is that people consuming fast
food
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several times a week
reach
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reached
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20% in 2003,
however
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, only about 17% in 2006 and 16% in 2013. It can be noticed that from 2006 to 2013 the same proportion of people, 15%, ate fast
food
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a few times a year but in 2003 the number
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
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dropped
at
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to
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nearly 17%.
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