The chart below shows the results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the UK in 2007.

The chart below shows the results of a survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the UK in 2007.
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The pie chart illustrates the survey's results of the reasons
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poor visiting of
school
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in the United Kingdom in 2007.
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, it can be seen that both parents working is the most usual reason for skipping
school
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in 2007. What is more, peer group pressure and bullying are the same in figures.
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the data, a large proportion of students, 40%, skipped
school
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in 2007 because both adults were working. A quarter of pupils did not go to educational
institution
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as
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school
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did not have enough discipline. It is
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worth mentioning that the same percentage, 15%, was because pressure of
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from peer
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group
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and bullying. It can be noticed from the materials, that upbringing was the minor reason
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poor attendance,
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only 5%
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attendance
  • survey
  • causes
  • parental involvement
  • bullying
  • safety concerns
  • academic performance
  • motivation
  • physical health
  • mental health
  • support
  • resources
  • students
  • peer pressure
  • influence
  • school environment
  • curriculum
  • transportation issues
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