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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent's absence. Discussion

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The line graph provides information about how Dubai gold
sales
 change over a
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 period. To give an overview, it was remarkable to notice that March
sales
 reached at highest
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 July and September
sales
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. To commence with, it was observed that in the first
month
sales
 of gold in 2002 began at 200 and they slightly rose in the next
month
.
Nevertheless
, during the March
month
, it escalated and reached 350. Even though,
sales
 dramatically dropped in April
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100.
Moreover
, throughout the next four
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sales
 continuously declined and reached nearly 125 in July.
However
, again it boosts with 75 million
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dirhams till August
month
.
While
,
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this
 trend continued
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again it dwindled and reached the same amount of
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sales
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 July
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Furthermore
, it climbed till October
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