The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010.

The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010.
This
bar chart indicates recycled percentages of
plastic
,
cans
,
paper
and
glass
waste
during the
years
between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, is it clear that the
percentage
of recycled
waste
has increased over the past 10
years
.
It is clear that
the
Glass
recycling
percentage
over the 10
years
was drastically increased compared to other recycled
waste
.
Whereas
,
plastic
was the least recycled
waste
within
this
decade. In the year 1992, the
plastic
,
cans
,
paper
and
glass
waste
recycled
percentage
stood at 10%,8%,13% and 15% respectively.
On the other hand
, in
years
the
plastic
,
cans
,
paper
and
glass
waste
recycled
percentage
were 12%, 20%,40% and 50%.
It is clear that
, during
this
decade the recycling
percentage
has improved drastically. In mid of
this
10-year period, the figures for recycling percentages of
cans
and
paper
have increased significantly reaching 19% to 22%.
By contrast
, the recycling rate of
cans
slightly decreased to about 11%,
while
the figure for plastics was just over 10%. 5
years
later, the recycling rates of these four types of
waste
experienced a dramatic increase, and the figures for them were all over 20%. 40% of metals had been recycled in the town, which is the highest recycling rate of the four types of
waste
. the follower
was
Change the verb form
was canned
was canning
show examples
cans
, reaching 33%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, cans, paper, glass, waste, years, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling rates
  • types of waste
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic and glass
  • noticable increases
  • stable
  • landfill sites
  • decrease
  • percentage
  • 10-year period
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