The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010.
This
bar chart indicates recycled percentages of plastic
, cans
, paper
and glass
waste
during the years
between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, is it clear that the percentage
of recycled waste
has increased over the past 10 years
.
It is clear that
the Glass
recycling percentage
over the 10 years
was drastically increased compared to other recycled waste
. Whereas
, plastic
was the least recycled waste
within this
decade. In the year 1992, the plastic
, cans
, paper
and glass
waste
recycled percentage
stood at 10%,8%,13% and 15% respectively. On the other hand
, in years
the plastic
, cans
, paper
and glass
waste
recycled percentage
were 12%, 20%,40% and 50%. It is clear that
, during this
decade the recycling percentage
has improved drastically.
In mid of this
10-year period, the figures for recycling percentages of cans
and paper
have increased significantly reaching 19% to 22%. By contrast
, the recycling rate of cans
slightly decreased to about 11%, while
the figure for plastics was just over 10%.
5 years
later, the recycling rates of these four types of waste
experienced a dramatic increase, and the figures for them were all over 20%. 40% of metals had been recycled in the town, which is the highest recycling rate of the four types of waste
. the follower was
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cans
, reaching 33%.Submitted by shazraibrahimphotography2 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, cans, paper, glass, waste, years, percentage with synonyms.
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