8.You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter Describe the vacation spot you have chosen Explain how you plan to spend your time there Invite your friend to join you on your vacation.

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Dear Phoenix, I hope you are doing well. I am incredibly excited about sharing with you the vacation that I am planning for my family. We are going to the beach where there are a lot of outdoor activities. We plan to spend
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vacation in Resort Vinwonder in Nha Trang City. The resort is located
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on
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one of the most
beatiful
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beautiful
islands in Vietnam and it has specular views from all directions. It
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has a private beach and an attractive playground for children. Upon reaching the resort, we can enjoy some
advanture
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adventure
games like flyboard and roller coaster
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our kids can visit the aquarium which can help them to have a deeper understanding of marine life. On top of that, we can enjoy fresh seafood at seaside restaurants. How about if your family join with us? It would be a wonderful opportunity to escape the busy life in the city for a few days and immerse
ourself
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in
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nature. I intend to take
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vacation in the second half of November. I hope that you will
free
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. Let me know if you are interested in
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plan. Lots of love, Lana
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task achievement
Make sure to provide more specific details about the beach and its outdoor activities.
coherence cohesion
Consider adding a sentence to conclude the letter and express anticipation for your friend's response.
lexical resource
Vary your sentence structure and use a wider range of vocabulary.
grammatical range accuracy
Review your use of articles (e.g. the, a, an) and make sure they are used correctly.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking scenery
  • cultural landmarks
  • itinerary
  • accommodations
  • excursions
  • gastronomic delights
  • leisure activities
  • unwind and relax
  • off the beaten track
  • once-in-a-lifetime experience
  • picturesque
  • explore
  • local cuisine
  • adventure
  • bonding
  • create memories
  • companionship
  • escapade
  • serenity
  • revitalize
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