The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.

The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.
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The bar and pie graphs depict the degree of the standard education categorised by
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and gender in Glasgow, Scotland, in 2010.
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, approximately three-quarters of those under the
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of 50 had tertiary education and roughly one-third of the men and the women were divided into three different educational levels.
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, looking at the bar graph,
it is clear that
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more than 70% of the
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among 16-50 were qualified university degree and 20% of those under 75 finished their
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education, except those aged 24-35, only 15% of those acquired a certificate from
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.
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, university degrees in those over 75 made up only a quarter of the total,
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non-qualifications accounted for over three-quarters of the total and the
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of
school
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certificates was the least (3%) in
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group. In terms of non-qualification, there was the lowest
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in the
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under 50 at 9%,
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the
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of no-qualification positively correlated to the
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of ageing in over 50.
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,
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the data given in the pie chart, almost over a third of both genders had a
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or university qualification, and
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non-qualification people in both genders accounted for the highest proportion at 38% in women and 35% in men.
To sum up
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, it is obvious that the younger
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groups under 50 had a higher degree and there was not much difference among the genders as regard to the figure for educational levels.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, school, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage distribution
  • educational levels
  • qualifications
  • higher education
  • school level qualifications
  • no qualifications
  • proportions
  • notable trends
  • outliers
  • age demographics
  • economic conditions
  • social policies
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