The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.

The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.
The bar and pie graphs depict the degree of the standard education categorised by
age
and gender in Glasgow, Scotland, in 2010.
Overall
, approximately three-quarters of those under the
age
of 50 had tertiary education and roughly one-third of the men and the women were divided into three different educational levels.
Firstly
, looking at the bar graph,
it is clear that
more than 70% of the
age
among 16-50 were qualified university degree and 20% of those under 75 finished their
school
education, except those aged 24-35, only 15% of those acquired a certificate from
school
.
In contrast
, university degrees in those over 75 made up only a quarter of the total,
while
non-qualifications accounted for over three-quarters of the total and the
number
of
school
certificates was the least (3%) in
this
age
group. In terms of non-qualification, there was the lowest
number
in the
age
under 50 at 9%,
while
the
number
of no-qualification positively correlated to the
number
of ageing in over 50.
Secondly
,
according to
the data given in the pie chart, almost over a third of both genders had a
school
or university qualification, and
also
non-qualification people in both genders accounted for the highest proportion at 38% in women and 35% in men.
To sum up
, it is obvious that the younger
age
groups under 50 had a higher degree and there was not much difference among the genders as regard to the figure for educational levels.
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  • percentage distribution
  • educational levels
  • qualifications
  • higher education
  • school level qualifications
  • no qualifications
  • proportions
  • notable trends
  • outliers
  • age demographics
  • economic conditions
  • social policies
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