the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph demonstrates the

number

of shops that closed and opened in the same country between the period of 2011 to 1018.

Overall

, both

number

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the number

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of closures and openings in the graph

shows

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a decrease. Cases of closures started with more than 6000, at the start of the period, and ended with a decrease by 2 times and

reaced

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reached

3000

at the end

.

Whereas

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the occurence

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occurence

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occurrence

of openings started with 8500 and shows a

falled

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drop

to

slighly

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slightly

more than 5000, in 2018. In terms of

number

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a number

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of

shop

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shops

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closing, there

is

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a

slowly

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fall from 2011 to 2012 and a growth

and

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apply

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reaching the highest point in 2013. After it fluctuated and decreased

shaply

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sharply

shapely

and reached

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of roughly 800 in 2015,

then

it almost regained and reached more than 5000 in 2016. Regarding the

number

of opening instances, the vertex point was at the start of the period of observation.

However

, in 2012 it

falled

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fell

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dramatically to the point of 4000.

Them

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graph shows a

gradually

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gradual

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increase with

following

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decrease.

In addition

, between 2015 and 2017 there is no

sighnificant

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significant

change and a

further

fall.