The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

The line graph gives data about the average

number

of weekly

patients

visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016. As can be seen, the figures of

patients

to

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diabetic

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and eye increased,

the

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and the

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number

of birth control

also

rose from 2010 to 2012

then

it

started

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decrease

untill

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until

2014, in 2014 it again rose, and by 2016 it had risen and was almost equal to its original

number

. The

number

of weekly

patients

visiting Dental

clinic

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from 2010 to 2012 abruptly fell,

however

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since

2012

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2012,

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it has increased. In 2010 the

number

of weekly

patients

visiting

birth

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the birth

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control

clinic

was 250 in 2016 it was almost the same. In 2010 the

number

of weekly

patients

visiting

eye

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clinic

was more or less 125 by 2016 it had been 350. In 2010 the

number

of weekly

patients

attending Diabetic

clinic

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clinics

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was more than 50, by 2016

due to

the

increasing

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it had been a little less than 200. And the

number

of weekly

patients

visiting

to

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dental originally was 100 and in 2016 the

number

was roughly 180