The graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and the threats to plant life.
The two charts provide information on the proportion of
species
that went extinct and what threatened them to extinction
. Tropical forest species
loss rose remarkably in 2060, then
it went down in 2100. Species
in the world are threatened more by so many various human impacts than natural events
.
Less than 10.000
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10,000
species
went extinct in 2000, but every 20 years, the damages are absolutely horrendous. Just by the year 2060, the extinction
rose dramatically by about 1000% with the total absence of 50.000
animals and Correct your spelling
50,000
plants
in tropical forest
, Fix the agreement mistake
forests
this
is the highest loss over a century between 2000 and 2100. The extinction
then
decreased to slightly over 20.000
in 2100 with a little less than Correct your spelling
20,000
30.000
loss.
Human impacts have more threats to the Correct your spelling
30,000
plants
than natural events
. It has a slightly over four fifth
of the Correct your spelling
four-fifths
impact
of endangered plant species
while
natural events
have a little less than a fifth of threats. Agriculture, harvesting and development takes
up more than half of human Change the verb form
take
impact
and the rest are under a tenth. While
natural disasters threaten a small amount of plants
, other natural events
participate in a little over one tenth
of endangered plant life.
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one-tenth
Overall
, the impact
of endangered animals and plants
to the extinction
of them mostly comes from the human impact
. If the threats of
plant life and animal Change preposition
to
species
are neglected, the consequent of extinction
will rise eventually.Submitted by keykolubis on
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