The table gives information about the population of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparison where necessary.
The given table illustrates the data of
New
Zealand population by Correct article usage
the New
age
groups between 2011 to 2012.
Although
the total population in both years doesn't have much difference, which is divided among 4 different groups and the percentage of the changes has been calculated.
In 2011, the highest people
Correct quantifier usage
number of people
are
1,577,256 between the Wrong verb form
was
age
Fix the agreement mistake
ages
15
-39 and the least Change preposition
of 15
is
above 65+ with a number of 573,946 including the highest percentage of change with +4%. The other two groups under 15 and 40-64 Wrong verb form
was
has
population relatively Change the verb form
have
same
Correct article usage
the same
with
the rest. Change preposition
as
In contrast
to the given year 2012 doesn't have much of the
difference in the number it just shows Correct article usage
a
slight
increase.
The percentage of change is highest among the above 65+ Add an article
a slight
age
group and least in Correct article usage
the child
child
Correct article usage
the child
age
, 15-39 group.Submitted by noorainfatima135 on
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