The line graph shows the changes in the populationes of six different areas of the world bwtween 1960 and 2010.
The chart illustrates the
number
of people
changes in six areas
of the globe between 1960 and 2010.
Overall
, the figure for people
raised between 1960 and 2010, but only two areas
were stable. On the other hand
, south Asia
was raised dramatically compared to other areas
.
In1960, the number
of populations in Europe & Central and South Asia
was similar around 750 million people
but after next years, South Asia
had a significant increase so the people
who lived in this
area was more than in Europe & Central Asia
.
On the other hand
, by 2000, the populations in the Middle East and North Africa had a gradual rise while
the number
of people
higher than in North America became the last
population area. In addition
, from 1960 to 2010, the
East Correct article usage
apply
Asia
& Pacific has always highest populations compared to these six areas
. Furthermore
, the number
of people
who live in the
East Correct article usage
apply
Asia
& Pacific was
a Verb problem
has
gramatic
increase between 1960 and 2010 Correct your spelling
dramatic
become
Wrong verb form
becoming
second
highest population area.Correct article usage
the second
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