Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.
According to
the number of people
, recent message conveying technologies are having side effects
on interpersonal relationships of an individuals. However
, there are several people
, according to
whom social media also
have some positive effects
. Looking from an all perspective, I strongly believe that both points are correct, which are discussed with some relevant examples.
To commence with, nowadays, men and women prefers to spend their leisure time by chatting with some person over an internet, instead
of visiting his or her friend living in neighbourhood. While
they prefer to make some new friends
over net, their social relationship with their families and friends
is decreasing. For instance
: there are so many online games available for children which allows them to make some new friends
while
playing their favourite games. This
may lead to disturbance from their studies and social life.
In addition
to this
, social platforms makes people
less active. Human beings prefer to spend most of their time as a couch potato. This
not only waste their time however
, can also
be the reason for numerous disease, such
as obseity, diabetes and several heart related issues.
In contrast
to this
, there are sundry benefits of these technologies. Unlike in past, people
in recent years can talk with their friends
, families and many other people
just by sitting in different nations. For example
: I have cousins living in different countries, some are in Europe while
other is in America. I can talk to them just by calling them, which was not possible for last
two or three decades.
To conclude
, modern technologies may have some bad effects
on people
's life, somehow, it also
have positive effects
. This
totally depends on how communities are using it. People
should balance their lifestyle online and world outside the social media platformsSubmitted by khushiaggarwal255 on
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