Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you thing this is a positive or a negative development?

These days many people with health problems are trying

alternative

medicines and treatments

instead

of visiting their usual doctor. In ancient times, people used

alternative

medicine

or folk

medicine

, which is treating themselves with herbs, etc. In

this

article, I will discuss the pros and cons. From my point of view, I see that the negatives in using traditional or folk

medicine

are more than the positives،there are many reasons for

this

,

such

as No one knows how

this

medicine

affects a person or what the complications of

this

medicine

are.There are

also

some cases in which herbs are used that have complications

such

as allergies, which can cause death for some. It is

also

possible for a non-specialized person to use herbs, which is dangerous.

Although

there are many disadvantages, for some the advantages are more important than the disadvantages, and the most important of these advantages is that

alternative

medicines are usually cheaper and you do not have to go to pharmacies.

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up, the

alternative

treatment will be forever because it has some advantages which many people think

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can outweigh the disadvantages but I do not think so.