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Parents are the best teachers do you agree or disagree ?

#parents #teachers
The quality of education is very important in our
life
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lives
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.
When
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While
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 many people argue that
parents
 teach their
children
 better than teachers, others think that professional teachers are more qualified. I completely agree that
parents
 are the best mentors in the world.
Firstly
,
children
 in their life start learning from their
parents
 how to communicate with
other
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others
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.
Habits
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The habits
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 and behaviours of the child depend on the environment of the family in which they are living. School start at 6 years old, at
this
age
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age,
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children
 have already essential knowledge about society.
For example
, with the birth of a child,
parents
 teach their babies how to speak, how to walk,
how
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and how
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 to eat. A baby's
first
 word tends to be formulated to address their mother and father to get their attention.
Therefore
 learning
ones
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one's
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first
 words is a great achievement and it's all thanks to
parents
.
Secondly
, there are some values that educators can not teach
for
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to
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children
.
For instance
, with academic programmes we can learn math, physics, geography or science but professional professors can not teach
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us how
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how
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us how
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 to
get
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make
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 a happy living.
It is clear that
 when we face some trouble or have to cope with pressure,
parents
 are the
first
 people that we find and share with. Mom and
dad
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Dad
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 always give us useful
advices
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advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
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 and
willing
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are willing
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 to help us. Plus,
parents
also
 have more time, especially mothers
would
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who would
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 not be tired of repeating one thing over and over for their infant. In conclusion, I absolutely agree that
parents
 are the
first
 and the best teachers as they give us the lesson that we can not find in books and they are the ones who give everything for us to become a better person.
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