A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, tell about these things. In your email: •Say what these things are • Say why they are interesting/enjoyable • Suggest what you can do together

#friend #visit #community #email #•say

Dear Phoenix, I hope you are doing well. I was incredibly happy when you decided to spend your upcoming holiday in

Sapa

, a picturesque

city

located in the northern part of Vietnam, especially considering that you have never been to

this

city

before. You asked me the most interesting things to do in

Sapa

. Well,

this

city

is home to several minority ethnic communities. We will have opportunities to interact with these communities, learn about their traditions and customs and perhaps stay in a homestay to experience their unique lifestyles.

Additionally

Sapa

also

famous for its panorama view, especially from Fansipan, the highest peak in Indochina. We would hike to the summit of Fansipan, taking into the spectacular view of the Hoang Lien Son mountain range and surrounding valleys. On top of that, we can enjoy the local cuisine, including hearty soup, grilled meat and fresh vegetables.

Sapa

's cuisine is influenced by both Vietnamese and minority cultures. Please let me know if you are interested in

this

plan. Keep in touch with each other until you arrive at

Sapa

City

. Lots of love, Lana

Submitted by nguyenlyacbd on Thu Oct 19 2023

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