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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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becuase
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because
 you have
mention
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mentioned
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 the wrong
statment
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statement
 in your yesterday newspaper for
Mr.
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Mr
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 Mukesh
sharma
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Sharma
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. When I read it,
then
 i shocked
afer
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after
 the read newspaper you have
mention
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mentioned
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 that
person
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the person
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 is
corrupt
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a corrupt
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business man
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businessman
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 and he stolen a lot of
lands
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of
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 poor people. I
know
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this
perosn
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person
since
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for
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last
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the last
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 twenty years. He is a great person and he is always ready to help poor people. I think you have received some wrong information or some
misunderstand
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 of that person. He is
social
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a social
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perosn
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person
 and He
given
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gave
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 a
klot
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lot
 of funds to the
charties
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charities
. I know
a lots
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a lot
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 of people he
have
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has
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 helped in poor condition and till the date when condition is not better. Please
cross check
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 your
data base
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database
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 and re-
published
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publish
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 the news with
apology
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an apology
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.
i
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I
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advice
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 to you before
write
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writing
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this
 type
news
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of news
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 please check
throughly
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thoroughly
 and based on solid evidence. If you want
the
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another detail or any clarity and any
descission
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decision
decisions
discussion
, you can
contant
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contact
 me on my phone number 7845216156. Yours
Sincerly
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Sincerely
,
Lavneet
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Navneet
 Kumar
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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