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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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 letter because you mentioned the wrong statement in your yesterday newspaper for
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 Mukesh Sharma. When I read it, I was shocked after the read newspaper you mentioned that the
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 was a corrupt businessman and he had stolen a lot of land from poor people. I have known
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person
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 for the
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 twenty years. He is a great
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 and he is always ready to help poor people. I think you have received some wrong information or some misunderstanding of that
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. He is a social
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 and He gave a lot of funds to charities. I know a lot of people he has helped in poor condition and till the date when the condition is not better. Please cross-check your database and re-publish the news with an apology. I advise you before writing
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 please check thoroughly and based on solid evidence. If you want another detail or any clarity and any decision, you can contact me on my phone number 7845216156. Yours Sincerely,
Lavneet
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Navneet
 Kumar

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