The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the number of Catholic
people
leaving
in China, India, Philippines, Vietnam, Korea, and Japan from 2010 to 2013.
Verb problem
living
Overall
, the majority of people
lived in Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
in
all the years, Change preposition
for
whereas
the least
group of individuals lived in Japan.
Correct your spelling
last
According to
the data, a large proportion of people
, at 75 millions
and 72.000.000 respectively , Change to singular
million
habitated
in Correct your spelling
habituated
Philippines
in 2010 and 2013. Correct article usage
the Philippines
However
, Japan bottomed out, at 400 thousands
and 509 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
Change to singular
thousand
accordingly
. It is also
worth mentioning that India was preferable too, reaching a peak of 10 million of
Change preposition
apply
people
, in 2010 and 19.000.000 in 2013.
It can be seen from the graph that Vietnam
there was almost an equal amount of Change preposition
in Vietnam
people
in the years, 5 millions
and 600 Change to singular
million
thousands
and 5.321.168. As for Korea, it was a less popular place than other countries, reaching 5.270.000, and Change to singular
thousand
then
started to decline, hit
a low of 1 million Wrong verb form
hitting
of
residents.Change preposition
apply
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