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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is avery difficult task. what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What are the best ways to overcome them?explain an include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems.

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Nowadays it is considered by a
lot
 of
people
 that it can be uneasy to learn a foreign
language
. The essay will show some complicated things
of
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 studying foreign
languages
 and ways of overcoming them.
To begin
 with, it is a trend of learning foreign
languages
 between
people
 of all ages.
However
, some individuals could face a
lot
 of issues during the process. First of all, it might be complicated for them to learn new words because they can have problems with their memory.
For example
, students usually get bad marks as they cannot learn a poem, written in their native tongue, by heart.
Thus
, if they cannot memorize verses appropriately, they especially have a
lot
 of issues in studying new
languages
 .
Secondly
, many
people
 cannot speak fluently,
therefore
, they cannot know a
language
 as a native speaker. As an
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 some educational institutions, schools, universities, colleges, and special courses, do not pay enough attention to improving speaking skills so
people
 can face a
language
 barrier. To solve all the above problems, it would be reasonable for learners to strive to improve memory.
For example
, it is beneficial to retell what they read, no matter in what
language
. What is more,
people
 can use special applications, like
quizlet
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, which can assist them in learning new data and making the process more interesting. As for speaking skills, individuals can find foreign friends
in
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 the Internet and interact with them. If they are shy and do not have a craving for making new friends, they can keep a video diary where various things can be told. In conclusion, I firmly believe that learning foreign
languages
 can cause a
lot
 of difficulties but if a person makes an effort, all the difficulties will disappear.
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Provide a more detailed explanation of the specific difficulties faced when learning a foreign language.
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Ensure a clear and logical progression of ideas throughout the essay.
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Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the essay.
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Pay attention to the use of complex sentence structures to demonstrate a higher level of grammatical range.

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