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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.other,however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it,should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Disscuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Across the globe,
crime
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 rate is increasing day by day
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rapid
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 speed.
However
, one segment of
People
think
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 that there should
a
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permanent
punishment
 for different types of
crime
 as it will help in the reduction of
crime
 and
people
 learn the worst
things
 happen
withthem
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with them
 if they do
such
things
, but
other
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 segment of
people
 believes that it should be
according
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 the
suitation
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situation
 why he commits that
crime
 should be considered into the account because of family conditions and somebody forced him to do it for their benefits.In my opinion, it should
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according to
 the conditions in which it is done. On the one hand, there is a constant
punishment
 for the wrong deed
which
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 any
person
 has done because it will remind him or her before doing
such
things
that
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what a reward he or she will get by doing that act.
For instance
, if an individual
kill
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 somebody
then
 he knows that he will
be hang
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 for it tomorrow as his deed which he has done.
Thus
,
punishment
 should be fixed.
On the other hand
, a
person
 is treated by the
crime
 he had done
according to
 his
suitation
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situation
.
such
 as there are
people
 who are forced by their family needs, so to
fulfill
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 it they are doing the
crime
 .
Furthermore
, there are some leaders who
motivates
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 the individual to do
such
 work because it is for the protection of their religious or their identity.
Hence
,
crime
punishment
 must be
according
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according to
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their
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the
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 reason for committing it.
To sum up
,
punishment
according to
 the
crime
 a
person's
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person is
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 doing
and
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apply
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they
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apply
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will remain
same
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the same
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 without any consideration of anything on
other
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the other
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 side, one
person
's
crime
 which he has done
that
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apply
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is decided by his or her condition. In my view , it is decided by the circumstance in which it is done because
sometime
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person
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a person
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don't
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doesn't
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 want to do
such
things
 but he is forced to do it to save himself or his
near
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loved
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 ones.
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