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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.other,however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it,should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Disscuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Across the globe,
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crime
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the crime
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 rate is increasing day by day
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rapid
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a rapid
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 speed.
However
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, one segment of
People
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think
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 that there should
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permanent
punishment
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 for different types of
crime
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 as it will help in the reduction of
crime
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 and
people
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 learn the worst
things
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 happen
withthem
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with them
 if they do
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things
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, but
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 segment of
people
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 believes that it should be
according
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 the
suitation
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situation
 why he commits that
crime
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 should be considered into the account because of family conditions and somebody forced him to do it for their benefits.In my opinion, it should
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according to
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 the conditions in which it is done. On the one hand, there is a constant
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 for the wrong deed
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 any
person
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 has done because it will remind him or her before doing
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things
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that
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what a reward he or she will get by doing that act.
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, if an individual
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 somebody
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 he knows that he will
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 for it tomorrow as his deed which he has done.
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,
punishment
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 should be fixed.
On the other hand
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, a
person
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 is treated by the
crime
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 he had done
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 his
suitation
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situation
.
such
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 as there are
people
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 who are forced by their family needs, so to
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 it they are doing the
crime
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 .
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, there are some leaders who
motivates
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 the individual to do
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 work because it is for the protection of their religious or their identity.
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,
crime
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punishment
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 must be
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according to
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their
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the
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 reason for committing it.
To sum up
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,
punishment
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according to
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 the
crime
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 a
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person's
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person is
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 doing
and
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apply
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they
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apply
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will remain
same
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the same
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 without any consideration of anything on
other
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 side, one
person
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's
crime
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 which he has done
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that
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is decided by his or her condition. In my view , it is decided by the circumstance in which it is done because
sometime
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person
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a person
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don't
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doesn't
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 want to do
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things
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 but he is forced to do it to save himself or his
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loved
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 ones.

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