Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Cultural diversity is significantly appreciated in all parts of the world nowadays.

Although

many

people

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that showcasing

culture

to attract

tourists

for financial gains could be damaging,

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other group of

people

thinks

this

is the absolute method of preserving their

culture

. Calling a majority of

tourists

to visit

one

's

culture

or locality can undoubtedly cause some problems

however

, the biggest question here is, restricting the

tourists

from another place is the only way of protecting it

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I do not think so as there are many different ways of doing so. On

one

side, those who consider that

tourism

has a negative impact on cultural values might think that the large number of

people

coming to visit a cultural heritage can make it dirty with a lot of clutter as they may not contribute to

overall

cleanliness thinking about it's not their own

culture

.

For example

, someone who is unaware of

one

's religion and custom of removing shoes

while

entering a temple might not just take off their shoes and make the temple floor filthy.

Moreover

, even the local residents can try to distort the originality of their

culture

for their financial growth which can lead to misrepresentation of their

culture

.

For instance

, Indian traditional clothes are not transformed by numerous small business designers into Indowestern attires, which is completely distinct from the traditional way of wearing clothes because these Indowestern styles are preferred by foreigners and sold more expensively.

Therefore

, there are undeniable reasons to not agree with the fact that

tourism

can ruin the

culture

if not taken seriously. Having said that,

people

who believe that the only way of protecting our

culture

is by inviting visitors may input their rationale as

tourism

brings income to a locality which eventually helps the government to pay for

maintenance

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the maintenance

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of cultural infrastructures.

For example

, most of the buildings have an entrance fee for the

sight seeing

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and more the number

people

coming in, the more benefits it will enclose.

On the contrary

, it is not the only solution and there are so many other ways to keep our

culture

safe,

one

of them is to educate

people

from outside the country or the local region about

one

's cultural practices and promote respect for all cultures.

For instance

, tourist guides can print crucial information to protect our heritage and encourage travellers to use proper guidelines to prevent any sort of damage.

To conclude

, it is our responsibility to protect

culture

but

tourism

is

also

paramount for any nation as it not only grows the economy of a country but

also

helps promote

one

's

culture

.

However

, a burst of

people

coming to experience different cultures can be detrimental as it could damage a property or change the originality of a cultural tradition

however

, stopping

tourism

is not the

one

and only solution to

this

concern as we can rather promote

tourists

about maintaining cleanliness, educating them about several steps to take in order to respect

one

's

culture

and heritage.