Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Cultural diversity is significantly appreciated in all parts of the world nowadays.

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many

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that showcasing

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to attract

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for financial gains could be damaging,

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other group of

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thinks

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is the absolute method of preserving their

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. Calling a majority of

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to visit

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or locality can undoubtedly cause some problems

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, the biggest question here is, restricting the

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from another place is the only way of protecting it

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I do not think so as there are many different ways of doing so. On

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side, those who consider that

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has a negative impact on cultural values might think that the large number of

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coming to visit a cultural heritage can make it dirty with a lot of clutter as they may not contribute to

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cleanliness thinking about it's not their own

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.

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, someone who is unaware of

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's religion and custom of removing shoes

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entering a temple might not just take off their shoes and make the temple floor filthy.

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, even the local residents can try to distort the originality of their

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for their financial growth which can lead to misrepresentation of their

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.

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, Indian traditional clothes are not transformed by numerous small business designers into Indowestern attires, which is completely distinct from the traditional way of wearing clothes because these Indowestern styles are preferred by foreigners and sold more expensively.

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, there are undeniable reasons to not agree with the fact that

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can ruin the

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if not taken seriously. Having said that,

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who believe that the only way of protecting our

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is by inviting visitors may input their rationale as

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brings income to a locality which eventually helps the government to pay for

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the maintenance

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of cultural infrastructures.

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, most of the buildings have an entrance fee for the

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and more the number

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coming in, the more benefits it will enclose.

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, it is not the only solution and there are so many other ways to keep our

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safe,

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of them is to educate

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from outside the country or the local region about

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's cultural practices and promote respect for all cultures.

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, tourist guides can print crucial information to protect our heritage and encourage travellers to use proper guidelines to prevent any sort of damage.

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, it is our responsibility to protect

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but

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paramount for any nation as it not only grows the economy of a country but

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helps promote

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's

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.

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, a burst of

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coming to experience different cultures can be detrimental as it could damage a property or change the originality of a cultural tradition

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, stopping

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is not the

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and only solution to

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concern as we can rather promote

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about maintaining cleanliness, educating them about several steps to take in order to respect

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's

culture

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and heritage.