You are a commuter. One morning on your way to work you suddenly fell ill and lost your consciousness. One gentlmen on the same bus sent you to a hospital. Write a letter to the company where the gentlmen works to extend your greatfulnes.

Dear Sir or Madam I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of thank you for, Mr Baker, the cashier your company.
Additionally
, the one hand first and important thing which should be mentioned is that I am a commuter. I take the bus Route 133 to work.
Last
Saturday morning when the bus almost reached the stop where I was to get off I suddenly felt dizzy and
then
I lost consciousness. When I came to, I found myself in St. Mary Hospital. He was attended by my wife. To commence, I to say thank you for
this
man. My wife and I were very much grateful to Mr Baker for his kindness.
Finally
, I do hope that your company would regard Mr. Baker for his noble deeds. Yours faithfully, Sarvinoz
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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