You are a commuter. One morning on your way to work you suddenly fell ill and lost your consciousness. One gentlmen on the same bus sent you to a hospital. Write a letter to the company where the gentlmen works to extend your greatfulnes.

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Dear Sir or Madam I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of thank you for, Mr Baker, the cashier your company.

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, the one hand first and important thing which should be mentioned is that I am a commuter. I take the bus Route 133 to work.

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Saturday morning when the bus almost reached the stop where I was to get off I suddenly felt dizzy and

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I lost consciousness. When I came to, I found myself in St. Mary Hospital. He was attended by my wife. To commence, I to say thank you for

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man. My wife and I were very much grateful to Mr Baker for his kindness.

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, I do hope that your company would regard Mr. Baker for his noble deeds. Yours faithfully, Sarvinoz

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

136 words

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You are a commuter. One morning on your way to work you suddenly fell ill and lost your consciousness. One gentlmen on the same bus sent you to a hospital. Write a letter to the company where the gentlmen works to extend your greatfulnes.

Word Count

The rise of online shopping has transformed the way many people purchase goods. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or the same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work

Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own addresses

After graduating from high school, some young people decide to start working right away instead of going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

Many university students cannot find a job in their chosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it?