The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
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The graph illustrates the differences in citizens smoking per 100 people in Someland over the term of 40 years between 1960 and 2000. Looking at the chart, it is readily apparent that men had the largest smoking rate
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women appeared to be the least popular in most of the survey years. On the one hand, from the beginning of the period, the sum of female smokers accounted for 100 followed by the male smoking percentage of 600 which was six times higher than the statistic for women.
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, there was a moderate rise in women’s smoking rate during the first half of the period after which they began to drop slowly to 200 people in the
last
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month.
On the other hand
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, the rate of men smoking decreased gradually after reaching a point at approximately 250 which was higher than the total of females by nearly 50 per 100 people.
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