The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the differences in the average temperature on a monthly basis in three demanding countries.
Overall
, it is already apparent that Sydney was the leading country with a statistic of nearly 23%, followed by Dubai showed a similar total of 22% while
Paris had the lowest percentage of the total survey.
On the one hand, from the beginning of the year, Sydney appeared to be the most popular community which had a statistic at approximately 24% after decreasing moderately to 13% in July then
began to increase significantly to 23% in December.
On the other hand
, Dubai occupied 19% four times higher than Paris in January after both of them demonstrated a substantial rise during the first half of the year at 36% and 20% respectively. Moreover
, the heat range in Dubai decreased considerably to 22% in the remaining month while
Paris also
performed a sum of 5 % in the last
month.Submitted by phthaoo
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