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The graph compares the number of people who visited 5 attractions in Parkvale city between 1996 and 2016.

The graph compares the number of people who visited 5 attractions in Parkvale city between 1996 and 2016.
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The graph compares the number of
people
 who visited 5 attractions in Parkvale city between 1996 and 2016.
Overall
, the National Gallery was by far the most popular venue after 2000,
although
 the Indigenous Art Centre
also
 saw a rise in visitor numbers.
While
 fewer
people
 went to the aquarium and zoo over the two decades, museum attendance remained fairly stable. In 1996, the aquarium was the main attraction, with over 500,000
people
 coming through the doors. Slightly fewer went to the museum
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that year, and the zoo and National Gallery welcomed approximately 300,000
people
 each.
Although
 the Indigenous Art Centre attracted barely 80 thousand
people
 in 1996, it
then
 enjoyed a huge rise in popularity over the next 10 years, peaking at almost 400,000 visitors in 2004 and reaching a similar figure in 2016. By that year,
also
, the National Gallery had seen an unparalleled increase in visitors to almost 1 million. Meanwhile, over the period shown, aquarium attendance plummeted by about 400,000, going from the most to the least visited venue. The zoo's figure fell substantially as well, though less dramatically,
while
 the museum saw little deviation from around 450,000 annual visitors.
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