The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare the

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English

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, French and non-official

language

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speakers in

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, every 10 years from 1996 to 2016.

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, during the 20-year span,

English

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was the main

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spoken in Canada. On the one hand, the percentage of people speaking

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reduced by 3% from 1996 to 2016.

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, the population that spoke French

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reduced by 2% during the same time span.

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, the non-official

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users increased by 5%, from 17% in 1996 to 20% in 2006, with an increase to 22% in 2016. In conclusion, the

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of inhabitants using

English

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and French decreased between the years 1996 and 2016.

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, the

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of non-official

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users increased.

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, in 1996 and 2006, most people spoke

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, followed by French, which was

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closely followed by non-official languages.

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, in 2016,

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English

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was the most spoken

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, the

number

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of non-official

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users

were

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more than those who spoke French.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words number, english, language with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

163 words

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