The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the
number
of English
, French and non-official language
speakers in canada
, every 10 years from 1996 to 2016. Change the capitalization
Canada
Overall
, during the 20-year span, English
was the main language
spoken in Canada.
On the one hand, the percentage of people speaking English
reduced by 3% from 1996 to 2016. Moreover
, the population that spoke French also
reduced by 2% during the same time span. On the other hand
, the non-official language
users increased by 5%, from 17% in 1996 to 20% in 2006, with an increase to 22% in 2016.
In conclusion, the number
of inhabitants using English
and French decreased between the years 1996 and 2016. However
, the number
of non-official language
users increased. Furthermore
, in 1996 and 2006, most people spoke English
, followed by French, which was then
closely followed by non-official languages. On the contrary
, in 2016, although
English
was the most spoken language
, the number
of non-official language
users were
more than those who spoke French.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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