You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to let you know that I forgot my bag
in
a flightChange preposition
on
,
when Remove the comma
apply
i
was travelling to London from India on 08th OctoberChange the capitalization
I
,
2024. When I arrived at my hotel in London, I Remove the comma
apply
got
Verb problem
found
to
Change preposition
out
know
that I left my purse Verb problem
apply
in
the flight. I was really worried because it contains some important items.
My bag is Change preposition
on
a
Correct article usage
apply
square shaped
and brown in colour with white stripes. There were Add a hyphen
square-shaped
few
items in my bag Correct article usage
a few
such
as travel
Correct article usage
a travel
adpator
, Ipad, Perfume, Wallet, and Airpods. You will find a tag Correct your spelling
adapter
attched
to it named Correct your spelling
attached
villie
.
I would like you to find my purse Correct your spelling
Billie
willie
along with
belongings
and if you need any information about my PR number, I will provide you. If you were able to find it, please send it to my address, which is 792 Josephine Correct pronoun usage
my belongings
ave
, London, N9B 2L3. I happy to pay any courier charges if there were any.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Faithfully,
Vishal JangralaCapitalize word
Ave
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Language Accuracy
Ensure to fix minor grammatical errors such as "I was really worried because it contains some important items" to improve overall fluency.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider providing more specific details about the flight, such as the flight number, to enhance clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The structure of your letter is logical, making it easy to follow and understand the progression of issues and requests.
Task Achievement
You have effectively addressed all aspects of the task, explaining the situation, describing the bag, and requesting a specific course of action.
Suitable Writing Tone
The tone is polite and appropriate for correspondence with an airline, which enhances the suitability of your writing.