1.You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: the type of accommodation you wish to find some details about yourself any special requirements you may have and any other relevant information.

Dear Sir or Madam, I recently received confirmation that I have gained
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placed
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on
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the
bachelor
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degree.Math course at your university,starting
this
September and
i
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am writing to you with regard to arranging to
accomodation
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accommodation
.My student number is 123456. I understand you offer
accomodation
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accommodation
which is located in off
campuss
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campus
.
Actually
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i
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would prefer to live off
campuss
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campus
with two or three
student
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, with each of them have own room.You offered 15
17dollors.
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17 dollars
and I can pay for
accomodation
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accommodation
a
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apply
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per week
only
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for only
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20
dollors
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dollars
.
In
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trust
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trust,
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i
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do not
any
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have any
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special
requirment
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requirements
but if it is possible
i
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wolud
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would
prefer to live with
only
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the only
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student
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students
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and
intersted
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interested
sports girls.Because of
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i
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relly
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really
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adore playing tennis and
i
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need
some
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partner for playing
this
kind
game
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of game
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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