1.You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: the type of accommodation you wish to find some details about yourself any special requirements you may have and any other relevant information.

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placed

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bachelor

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degree.Math course at your university,starting

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September and

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am writing to you with regard to arranging to

accomodation

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accommodation

.My student number is 123456. I understand you offer

accomodation

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accommodation

which is located in off

campuss

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campus

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would prefer to live off

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campus

with two or three

student

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, with each of them have own room.You offered 15

17dollors.

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17 dollars

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accomodation

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accommodation

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per week

only

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dollors

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dollars

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trust

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do not

any

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requirment

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requirements

but if it is possible

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wolud

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student

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intersted

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interested

sports girls.Because of

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relly

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adore playing tennis and

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need

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partner for playing

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

124 words

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