1.You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: the type of accommodation you wish to find some details about yourself any special requirements you may have and any other relevant information.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently received confirmation that I have gained
Correct article usage
a
placed
Replace the word
place
on
the Change preposition
in
bachelor
degree.Math course at your university,starting Change noun form
bachelor's
this
September and i
am writing to you with regard to arranging to Change the capitalization
I
accomodation
.My student number is 123456.
I understand you offer Correct your spelling
accommodation
accomodation
which is located in off Correct your spelling
accommodation
campuss
.Correct your spelling
campus
Actually
Add a comma
Actually,
i
would prefer to live off Change the capitalization
I
campuss
with two or three Correct your spelling
campus
student
, with each of them have own room.You offered 15 Change to a plural noun
students
17dollors.
and I can pay for Correct your spelling
17 dollars
accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
a
per week Correct article usage
apply
only
20 Change preposition
for only
dollors
.
Correct your spelling
dollars
In
Correct your spelling
I
trust
Add a comma
trust,
i
do not Change the capitalization
I
any
special Add a missing verb
have any
requirment
but if it is possible Correct your spelling
requirements
i
Change the capitalization
I
wolud
prefer to live with Correct your spelling
would
only
Add an article
the only
student
and Fix the agreement mistake
students
intersted
sports girls.Because ofCorrect your spelling
interested
Correct pronoun usage
this i
i
Change the capitalization
I
relly
adore playing tennis and Correct your spelling
really
i
need Change the capitalization
I
some
partner for playing Correct determiner usage
a
this
kind game
.Change preposition
of game
Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!