You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: the type of accommodation you wish to find some details about yourself any special requirements you may have and any other relevant information.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I recently received confirmation that I have gained a place in the bachelor's degree.Math course at your university,starting
this
September and I am writing to you with regard to arranging
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accommodation.My student number is 123456. I understand you offer accommodation which is located off-campus.Actually, I would prefer to live off campus with two or three students, with each of them having their own room.You offered 15 17 dollars and I can pay for accommodation per week for only 20 dollars. I trust
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I do not have any special requirements but if it is possible I would prefer to live with only students and interested sports girls.Because of
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really adore playing tennis and I need a partner for playing
this
kind of game.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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