With rising concerns about environmental degredation, some argue that the government should hold individuals accountable for their environmental impact. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that

government

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should have individuals

charge

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in charge

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of their impact concerning to environmental deterioration. I agree with

this

notion because

people

who

damaged

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the

environment

due to

poor regulations should encounter

with

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apply

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the consequences and if there are rules or restrictions

people

should think twice before doing things that harm their surroundings.

People

all over the world, now, are harming the

environment

more than ever before. Recent studies show that 65

percentage

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of environmental depletion occurred in the

last

three decades owing to the poor domestic policies that prioritize short-term economic gains. They have hurt the

environment

so dramatically that it causes huge problems

to

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the whole world.

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could

also

be

the

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a

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great example of individuals damaging the

environment

.

Therefore

,

government

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the government

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should keep

people

human beings have to be responsible for their environmental problems and have to deal with

on

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them on

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their own. Governments have imposed several laws and rules for the reason that

people

are not acting carefully and contributing

huge

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portion to environmental problems. International standards are

also

set to take

the

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apply

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control over

people

who constantly damage the

environment

. And

people

are advised to think carefully about

the

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their

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actions before doing something that

harm

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harms

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the

environment

because they could be fined heavily for their actions.

For example

, in December 2014 a couple held a marry-me event

then

were charged over 8 billion dollars

causing

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a huge forest wildfire for environmental disaster in the USA. In conclusion, I argue that governmental organizations should obligate

people

to handle what they have

cause

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to the surroundings and act responsibly

due to

legislations

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legislation

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made by a governing entity.