Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays most societies think that it is important to distribute amounts of
information
related to scientific study, business, and education. While
the rest of people
believe that some figures Correct article usage
the people
is
too crucial to be spread freely. In Change the verb form
are
this
essay, I am going to examine this
case from both viewpoints in the paragraph below.
To begin
, the advancement of technology has allowed humans to search for information
as much as possible. There are many resources such
as google scholar
, Correct your spelling
Google Scholar
research gate
, and so on. Correct your spelling
Research Gate
People
can access it 24 hours a day and read many topics starting from science, businesses, economics, and technology. For instance
, Indonesia
youngster these days start to Correct your spelling
Indonesian
Add a missing verb
be interest
interest
in increasing their literacy skills in Replace the word
interested
variety
of aspects. There are many accounts Add an article
a variety
in
social media that show articles and journals in unique Change preposition
on
way
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ways
such
as by adding some funny image
or voice in the stories. In my point of view, it is a good strategy to encourage teenagers to develop their literacy skills and knowledge.
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images
On the other hand
, it is necessary to protect crucial information
that is
shared through the internet or media. Nowadays, many people
who expert
in several field does not hesitate to spread the prohibited Add a missing verb
are expert
information
which is societies not allowed to perceive the news. For example
, it is forbidden to released
a journal related to how to create a nuclear to destroy the world. The article might be useful for the world of health, but it can be dangerous for Change the form of the verb
release
people
who does
not have basic knowledge or have negative motives.
In conclusion, it is important to share Change the verb form
do
information
as many
as possible Correct quantifier usage
much
especially
an insightful reading. Add the comma(s)
, especially
However
, some information
needs to be filtered before disseminated
to the world.Add a missing verb
being disseminated
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