The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.
The table demonstrates the seasonal observation of distinct
type
of birds in Woodchunck country.
Fix the agreement mistake
types
Overall
, it is clear that
while
Crows, Cardinals and Woodpeckers were seen both in winter and summer, Juncos was
solely visible in the winter times.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
To begin
with, it is noticeable that just three kind
of birds have existed in Woodchunk, namely, Crows, Cardinals and Woodpeckers. Change to a plural noun
kinds
On the other hand
, Juncos species had been seen in the country only in winters
.
Fix the agreement mistake
winter
Moreover
, based on the precise observation, the four rest species
( Vireos, Change preposition
of species
Oriloles
, Mockingbirds ,and Correct your spelling
Orioles
Blue birds
) Correct your spelling
Bluebirds
was
only visible during summer.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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