The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitors to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017.
The line diagram illustrates the average quantity of money that foreigners spent in New Zealand every day between 1997 and 2017.
Overall
, most international people spent money on business, almost in all years, whereas
visiting friends or family members was less significant.
According to
the data, a large proportion of foreigners spent money on business, hitting a high of about 335$, in 2002. However
, the statistics began to drop, reaching nearly 142 dollars, in 2015. As for holiday
, it was not very steady, international visitors Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
pay
Wrong verb form
paid
most
for Correct article usage
the most
it
in about 2003, spending 270$, and 200$ in 2015 which was the smallest sum in the category.
Compared with other things, visiting friends and relatives was the most constant, reaching a maximum of 220 dollars in approximately 2003, and Correct pronoun usage
them
then
started to fall, bottomed
out Wrong verb form
bottoming
119
dollars in ten yearsChange preposition
at 119
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