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You live near a public school. The school asked local residents to help maintain the school building and playground. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter: * Explain why you would like to help * Tell them how you can help * Let them know when you are available

#school #residents #playground
Dear Sir, It is Sarvinoz
who
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and
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i
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I
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 am from the local justice party. want to help keep
school
 buildings and their outside places from the local public. Why am I going to assist? Because Many pupils are
study and
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studying
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 there, Based on my experience, I may explain that
,
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apply
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 I
came
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this
 degree
for studying
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 there. They will increase their knowledge by Master teachers.
In addition
,
School
 is one of the
best sacred
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 places to acquire knowledge. So, I select
this
 decision. I can help them to maintain their buildings and their plants. Rebuilding there and Multiplying some types of plants will provide to become modern and charming. I have no free
time
 to help in the evening, Because, Through
time
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 will be busy, The specific and comfortable
time
 is in the afternoon. Why? Because All my problems will be worked out. I can find
an
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extra, free
time
. I am looking forward to expecting good news or a response. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Jumayeva Sarvinoz. You live near a public
school
. The
school
 asked local residents to help maintain the
school
 building and playground. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter: * Explain why you would like to help * Tell them how you can help * Let them know when you are available
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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