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Social media is gradually replacing in-person face-to-face contact with many people worldwide. Do the benefits of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #contact #people
the modern era,
their
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 is no doubt that social news is getting
popular
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more popular
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 day by day and
also
 replace face to face contact with
people
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of
the
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social
media
 and
also
 my thoughts.
Firstly
, to become successful or to study abroad community has to move from their home country and family member in
past
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the past
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 it was very difficult to talk and connect but
socialmeadia
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social media
give an opportunity to talk with family members who are living very apart from us and it is
good
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a good
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 way to connect with them .
Also
, there are many social
media
 platforms which give us a wide range of amenities to make new friends.
In addition
 to
this
,
people
 do not have to go outside to attend any classes or for the interview they can do it at home on apps like Zoom or meeting
On the other hand
 , social news
also
reduce
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reduces
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 in-person meetings with many
people
 as now
people
 prefer to call or send
text
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 to
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the
a
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family on
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special occasion like birthday, or anniversary rather than meeting in person which
also
 affects relationships.
Furthermore
, young adults are spending too much time on social
media
 apps and becoming addicted to them
as well as
 not giving time to family.
In addition
 to
this
, adults are making friends worldwide rather the neighbors which could lead to less social interaction. To summarize, Social
media
give
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gives
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 a wide platform to everyone in the world but it reduces the interaction between
people
 and
also
effect
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affects
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 their relationships.
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