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Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a debate whether kids under 18 years old should receive full-time studies or not. I disagree with
this
 idea because I believe that youngsters should have first-hand experience in earning
money
 and
also
 learn other
skills
 aside from academic knowledge. Before 18 years old is the best time to absorb all knowledge,
nevertheless
, I believe that children should gain first-hand experience on an actual job to strengthen their mental state and
also
 to gain their own
money
.
This
 is good for the youngster's mentality development because they will engage with real-world problems.
In addition
, children could
also
 live independently since they have their own
money
 and do not depend on their parents.
Furthermore
, not fully committed to full-time education could lead to learning
skills
 outside the academic
skills
.
This
 is because academic institutions only suggest learning hard
skills
instead
 of soft
skills
 like Drawing and sports.
This
 could give youngsters who are struggling for academics a chance in the real world.
For example
, in Sweden young people who did not attend full-time schools had chances in other sectors
such
 as sports and design because they had the time to learn other
skills
 outside the academic
skills
.
To conclude
, I disagree that young folks should attend full-time schools because they should be given a chance to earn their own
money
 to live independently and
also
 they could learn other expertise outside their academic knowledge which leads those who are struggling in academics to have a better chance in the real world.
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