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To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption?

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Environmental problems are the main issue for mankind nowadays and in order to ensure the continuation of life, governments should look for solutions immediately. Many
people
 believe that if
the
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fuel
prices
 increase,
the
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environmental pollution will decrease and the burden of the world will be reduced. In my opinion, increasing
fuel
prices
 cannot solve the problem,
instead
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 it can create new paradoxical problems for our
life
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lives
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. On the one hand, excessive
fuel
 consumption is
the
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 common characteristic among
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upper class
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upper-class
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people
. They usually have more than one car, prefer not to use public transportation, and frequently travel to
dıfferent
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different
place
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places
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 of the world using jets and
aiprlanes
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aeroplanes
.
Therefore
, their carbon footprint is significantly higher than that of ordinary
people
. So, if the governments increase the
fuel
prices
, which cannot be a huge economic burden for
this
 advantaged group of
people
, they can afford it without any major problem.
On the other hand
, fuels are not only used in cars but
also
 other essential devices and machines which are used for the production of important jobs like tractors for agricultural
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.
Moreover
, transportation of products is the biggest expenditure for consumers and rising
fuel
prices
 will affect lower and middle class
people
 more than upper class consumers. All in all, increasing
fuel
prices
 might sound good at first glance,
however
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 to cope with environmental issues
people
 should focus on other major pollutants
such
 as plastics and harmful chemicals. Recycling and raising
awereness
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awareness
 among
people
 could be a more effective solution than increasing
fuel
prices
.
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