Some people think that having a set retirement age for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

It is often argued that
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the retirement
age
for everybody should be equal. I strongly disagree
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given statement and my inclination is justified in the following
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and examples. The first argument put forward for stance is that
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there should be different
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of retirement for different
people
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because some
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workplace
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demand physical input and after a certain
age
everybody is not fit to do
such
labour work.
Moreover
, the work efficiency of some
people
decreases, everybody cannot like they would work when they were young.
Furthermore
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certain
professions require high levels of stress and
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responsibility
, and after a certain
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people
cannot handle that much stress and
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responsibility
.
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some workers with long years of service and excellent contribution to the job should be given
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early
retiremenet
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retirement
so that they can live peacefully and new generations and new
people
get
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to grow.
However
, some
people
may
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that, the
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retirement
age
should
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and equal for all
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so there is no difference in jobs and
people
, so there are no conflicts in society.
To sum up
, we can say that the retirement
age
for all professions should be different
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because
some jobs require real hard work and some jobs need real concentration and
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capablity
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capability
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fullfiliing
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fulfilling
the
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responsibilities
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  • retirement age
  • unfair
  • pension
  • occupation
  • workers
  • physically demanding jobs
  • professions
  • stress
  • responsibility
  • long years of service
  • excellent contributions
  • eligibility
  • individual circumstances
  • case-by-case basis
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