The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.

The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
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The illustration below tells the
manufature
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manufacture
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of olive
oil
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. The production has seven separate steps with two main steps.
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, the farmers
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up the
olive
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olives
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from the trees.
Then
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, the
olive
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are brought the a chamber in order to
rinsing
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rins them
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using cold water. In the next step, the olive enters another chamber by the belt,
this
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is where the olive
being
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smashed. After that, the process has
success fully
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produce
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produced
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the olive
paste
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and the
oil
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stones.
Then
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olive
paste
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are
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pagkaged
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packaged
in to
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bags with holes on the outside. Moving on to the next step
where
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the olive
paste
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being pressing
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using heat. After pressing it, the olive
paste
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goes to another chamber to separate the
oil
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out of the
the
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water.
Finally
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, the
oil
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are
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brought to the shop in order to
storage
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and
sale
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, paste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 0 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Harvesting
  • Ripe
  • Sorting
  • Crushing
  • Paste
  • Grinding stones
  • Steel blades
  • Pressing
  • Extraction
  • Liquids
  • Centrifuged
  • Settle
  • Purified
  • Distribution
  • Olive trees
  • Labels
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