The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
The illustration below tells the
manufature
of olive Correct your spelling
manufacture
manufacturer
oil
. The production has seven separate steps with two main steps.
Firstly
, the farmers picking
up the Wrong verb form
pick
olive
from the trees. Fix the agreement mistake
olives
Then
, the olive
are brought the a chamber in order to Fix the agreement mistake
olives
rinsing
using cold water. In the next step, the olive enters another chamber by the belt, Verb problem
rins them
this
is where the olive being
smashed. After that, the process has Add a missing verb
is being
success fully
Correct your spelling
successfully
produce
the olive Wrong verb form
produced
paste
and the oil
stones. Then
olive paste
are
Change the verb form
is
pagkaged
Correct your spelling
packaged
in to
bags with holes on the outside. Moving on to the next step Join the words
into
where
the olive Rephrase
apply
paste
being pressing
using heat. After pressing it, the olive Wrong verb form
is pressed
paste
goes to another chamber to separate the oil
out of the the
water. Remove the redundancy
apply
Finally
, the oil
are
brought to the shop in order to Change the verb form
is
storage
and Replace the word
store
sale
.Replace the word
sell
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