Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humans. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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We live in a changing world,
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progressive, modern, new things, that
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bring a lot of drawbacks to people, including new epidemics, and diseases.
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,
humans
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always
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, develop, and test new medicines, and other products, and
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are one of the experimental samples. Many people argue that these
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should be prohibited,
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others advocate them as they are useful for
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. I always believe that
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is extremely necessary, but we should find out a new sample to replace
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in
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. On the one hand, the fact that animal
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has many benefits for
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in medical
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and other product testing.
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research
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not only ensures human safety and survival but
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promotes human health.
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, animal testing plays a crucial role in ensuring that drugs are safe for human use. By testing drugs on
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, researchers can determine their potential side effects and
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safety before moving on to human trials.
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is an important step in protecting human health and ensuring the effectiveness of new treatments.
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deal with many problem in health human, but I strongly agree with the opinion that animal
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should be forbidden.
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they are
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, they
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have the right to live and, the right to be free. We can not take away their rights.
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is morally wrong, and ruthlessly for
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. Why don’t we use another thing to replace
animals
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in
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?
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, we can use cultured human cells on the “frame” of plastic chips, which is an efficient method called viscera on the chip. All in all,
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is essential to ensure that
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can safely survive when we cope with many epidemics and diseases.
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, animal
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are not a good method, they are so cruel. Government and competent authorities need to give many methods to restrict and ban
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on
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