The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps illustrate how the city hospital was reconstructed in 2010 and how the looked three years before.
Overall
, there will be expanding and adding in facilities and removing and modernising in some places.
In 2007, there were sites where the bus stopped in the both west and east of the hospital. There were Linking Words
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spots for cars in front of stop locations where staff and the public could park. Linking Words
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, to enter the city hospital, visitors from the city road can go ahead, turn right if bring any vehicles, and the destination is at the north.
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, in 2010 to enter the main destination, visitors from the road had to access the roundabout to the hospital Rd, go ahead, and park on the east. The parking area was relocated to a different location, where the staff could be found after a second roundabout on the right. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the bus stop was knocked downLinking Words
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and was converted to a bus station that was before entering Hospital Rd.Remove the comma
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