Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people, with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solution

Cigarettes were originally sold as an expensive handmade luxury item for the urban elites of Europe.

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, in the

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few

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tobacconist

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tobacco

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has become cheaper, and available

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public

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specially

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between young adults or even teenagers. I believe that

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popularity is rooted in advertising, family and friends. Everybody knows that smoking is not a healthy habit, but these days many people are addicted to

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this

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these

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harmful

drugs

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and most of them are youngsters which is a terrible age to

use

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unhealthy products that can cause serious damage to health. First of

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parents can be the reason their

child

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turns to

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, since children learn from adults and try to act like them parents should be very careful with their attitude around the

child

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.

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, if parents who are smokers smoke in front of their children, their

child

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may

use

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drugs

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because of curiosity, so

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of smoking in front of children, families can start

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together, and try to make healthy habits in their

child

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.

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, advertisements and TV series play an important role in drug

use

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among young people.

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, most of the popular characters in movies and series are smokers, and

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makes teenagers want to smoke to look like their

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character.

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, youngsters may turn to drug

use

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under the influence of their family and friends or their surroundings and out of curiosity, and

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can cause serious harm to their health. I think that families and even schools should inform young people about the dangers of

drugs

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, and

reminds

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them that they can handle their problems well and they don't need to

use

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drugs

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to escape from their negative thoughts.