You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television. Describe the television. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

Hey Frank, I hope you are doing well. As you know I am moving out to my new apartment next month.

For

this

reason, I am selling my television. Since my new living room is bigger, I need to purchase a bigger screen. It is a 43-inch TV,

Moreover

,It is filling twenty degrees of the field vision. Which guarantees an enjoyable experience.

In addition

, It is the perfect choice to play video games owing to its mixed usage benefits .

To sum up

, I believe it is going to be ideal for you. Especially if you were looking for a cheap one. If you are interested I will be waiting for you at home next Monday at 6:00 PM so you can examine it and see if It is going to be useful for you. I look forward to seeing you next Monday. Take care. Warm wishes. Katty.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

147 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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