The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some individuals may believe that the government’s investment should not be applied to

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as theatre and music, which they see as a waste of money. I totally disagree with

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statement because

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has not only a relevant economic impact on the

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a significant educational importance. The main reason I believe the government should keep investments in

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is because of the economic return to the

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. The art industry has become one of the biggest income resources in Brazil, and it is

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responsible for increasing

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employment in different fields.

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, the music industry is growing and reaching international platforms, bringing tourists to visit us, and

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inviting our national artists to perform in their countries.

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,

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has

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a very important role in our educational system.

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, art has been part of

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children's education for many years in Brazil, and the positive impact of it can be seen in the day-to-day routine of the schools.

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, there is a public dance theatre in my neighbourhood, and hundreds of children who do not have the condition to pay for a private school can

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from

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service. In conclusion, I strongly disagree that governments should stop investing in

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and art. Society

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not only benefited from the economic return to our

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from the educational impact on our people.

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, it is important to mention that there is enough money coming from our taxes to both needs,

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and social service, but unfortunately

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corruption does not allow the

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to thrive.